Through The Glass Darkly

I reworked Love letter #1 and turned it into this.  This was what I was going to read, but after three lines I froze.  I froze and stood their silent until the judge said “time,” about five times.  So I stood there for 3 minutes.  Wow.  That was a bit embarrassing, but it was actually great.  I got off that stage and got about 20 hugs and everyone clapped.  I also feel like I still accomplished something cool, and now I have a great story, and I met allot of amazing and very supportive artists.  So my next reading is April 28th.  I know I can do it and have my paper before me if I need it, but I do not think I will.  So that went well, depending on how you look at it.  I think it was probably more painful for the people watching then for me.  So there you go, I am a performance artist.  Sort of.

19 thoughts on “My first slam – Tell Tale 45

  1. Heartafire says:

    Bravo! Wonderful recital, lovely voice.


  2. Rick Stassi says:

    … and a good one.


  3. j4n says:

    You do have a beautiful voice, a Lauren Bacall voice…


    1. ahh Thank you :D


  4. Bastet says:

    :-) nothing like stage fright! A beautiful poem! Good for you that your going to give it another go!


    1. Thank you, next time will be better :)


  5. Like you say, it’s a great story to tell. But now you know what it’s like to be up there… you’ll be ready for it next time. Your reading was gorgeous – you have a great voice.

    I’ve never read my work in front of people but I do speak in public a lot… I think the only thing you have to remember is not to rush it once you’re up there (even writing ‘breath’ in between some of the lines can be a big help!).


    1. Ahh Thank you, and I will remember that. Next time I will be ready and next time is in 9 days. :D


  6. socialbridge says:

    I’m so glad you read it for us! It is a beautiful poem, read with perfect pace and in a captivating voice.
    You are no ‘Betty Generic.’ You are YOU and have so much to offer. We know it, I hope you know it and soon your live audiences will know it. With love and total understanding from Ireland, jx


    1. Thank you Jean, I appreciate hearing that support. Thank you :D


  7. Yoshiko says:

    Good voice :-)


      1. Yoshiko says:

        Welcome :-)


  8. Excellent reading, you did great just by standing up and doing your reading. I’m sure you will get better and better the more you do it.


  9. duncancleary says:

    Perhaps bring a copy of this great recording and stand there silently smiling as it plays while you are on the stage. Now that would be cool…


    1. Thank you, but I can do it. I’ll be ready next time. :)


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